Friday, 30 June 2017
Distinction key leadership role 2
Today was a leadership meeting, we met when everyone else in the class was eating so we didn't miss out on lunch which is good! We mostly talked about what we are going to do for the mural and also how we have to be up to a certain amount of blog posts to do the game at the end of the term for the people who have done their leadership role well. The people who have done it, got to go (like me) but the others had to stay and show Mr Ladbrook how many they had done. I showed community by giving my opinion bout the mural. I showed leadership by doing all of my blog posts so it was less work for Mr Ladbrook. I was a role model by doing all the work I needed to do, since i'm a leader.
Distinction key leadership role 1
Today all the student leaders got called into a meeting mostly about the house captains and the follow up from when we went to visit the city council and what we can do to help them with the environment. We decided as a group to make a mural, we need to wait until the lady in charge reply's before we know what to draw and create. The house captains got told to keep doing what were doing n terms of doing the bins and flags because we are doing well. I showed excellence by giving ideas for what we could do for the mural. I showed leadership by turning up and doing my jobs like the flags and bins. I was a role model by listening to Mr Ladbrook when he was talking.
Distinction kapa haka 1
Today was kapa haka. Firstly we went to the hall and sat in our spots in our lines for the performances, but then Mrs Baker realized there were heaps of gaps in the lines so we re organised all the spots again and we had to try and remember them for the next weeks so we wouldn't have to ask and annoy the teachers. So the teachers took a photo of us in our lines so they could tell us where we sit if we asked the next week. Next we went through our whole list of songs and fixed things we needed working on. I showed excellence by trying to remember my spot so I didn't annoy the teachers. I showed leadership by turning up to kapa haka. I was a role model by showing people where to sit and once I was assigned a spot I waited quietly for the other people to get a spot.
Wednesday, 28 June 2017
I can evaluate writers’ purposes and consider how they have used structure and language to suit these purposes. (Eg: I can make decisions about why the writer has written a piece of writing and how they have used particular structures and words to meet the purpose.
This is what we had to do for our blog post.
Assessment: I can evaluate writer's’ purposes and consider how they have used structure and language to suit these purposes. (Eg: I can make
decisions about why the writer has written a piece of writing and how they have used particular structures and words to meet the purpose.)
Name: Choose 3 out of the following texts:
L5 Author’s
Purpose
follow up
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I can describe the author's purpose in relation
to structure and language choices in a text
and give relevant evidence (eg vocabulary
used)
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I can compare and contrast differences in the author's
purpose in relation to structure and language choices
between different texts.
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The author’s purpose is to inform the reader and
give them facts.
The specific language/ structure choices that the
author has made to support their purpose are that
they have scientific and strong facts to prove their
point.
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Specific language choices
in the 3 texts:
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Structure of the 3 texts:
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Similarities
Sun and Laundry Folding Robot
both have informative
language and they also had
scientific language and
facts for the reader.
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Similarities
and Laundry Folding Robot both
have their facts at the start
and then later in the story
they keep backing up their
facts.
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The author’s purpose is to inform the reader and
let them know about this robot.
The specific language/ structure choices that the
author has made to support their purpose are they
have written about what the robot does and how it
could help people in their lives.
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The author’s purpose is to entertain the readers
and make them want to read the book maybe to
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Differences
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Differences
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their children.
The specific language/ structure choices that the
author has made to support their purpose are
making the tory fun like having a talking cat and
making it an adventure for the reader.
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cat story was different
because it had funny
language and it was
entertaining and the
author's purpose was not to
inform like the other two
texts.
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With the The World will end, said
the cat story it was
completely different
because the authors
purpose was to entertain
the reader not to give the
reader facts like the other
one.
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Level 5 -
Author's’
Purpose Map
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I can
describe the
author’s
purpose in a
text
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I can identify several features of the author’s purpose
The author’s purpose is…
The point of view is…
The intended audience is...
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I can identify several features of the author’s purpose; and
explain giving relevant examples and evidence.
What does it say in the text to show you that:
●this is the author’s purpose
●this is the point of view
●this is the intended audience
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The author’s
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To inform the reader what is going on with venus fly
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1.They used scientific sentences and words like
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purpose is…
P? I? E?
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traps and what they do.
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when they said the fact that the Dionaea
muscipula, or Venus's flytrap, feeds on
unsuspecting insects by luring them into its
jaw-like leaves with sweet-smelling nectar has
been known for centuries
2. They are telling the reader what is happening and what
has happened with venus fly traps like when they said
how this is not the first time the Venus flytrap has
impressed scientists.
3. They used strong statements like when they said the
smart plant knows that this could be the result of the
wind or a raindrop. It is only when the unsuspecting
creature triggers the sensory hair a second time that it
gets trapped inside the leaf.
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The point of
view is…
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Third person
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1. In the text they keep saying words like their and
that means its in third person like when they said
The proteins extracted from their prey
2. Also when they said according to the researchers.
3. And lastly when they kept saying “they.”
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The intended
audience is...
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Biology students at high school or university level.
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1.It has strong sentences like when they said
however, scientists thought the prey only
provided the plant with essential nutrients like
nitrogen and phosphorous, that are severely
lacking in their native habitats – the subtropical
wetlands of North and South Carolina.
2. And also when the author put according to the
researcher, the process begins when the insect lands
on the trap. If it just touches the sensory hair on the
leaves once, nothing happens.
3. And lastly when he said what they noticed was that a
significant amount of the carbon dioxide emitted during
respiration was derived from the prey being digested,
not from photosynthesis conducted by the plant. These
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are just examples because of the strong language the
author is using.
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I can generalise about the author’s point of view
Overall this text was informative and in third person view because the author wanted to teach people something
about the stuff he finds interesting and might want to put the message across that he wants more researchers to
do another experiment on the venus fly trap. I strongly think this text is aimed at biology students at high school
or university level because the author has put lots of scientific words that I cannot understand without looking
them up.
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